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Unforgettable Sun Fall

Unforgettable Sun fall; Late in the evening when so young Together we sit on the shoreline; Waiting for the last light of day Together we wait, for what the future will hold. Unforgettable Sun fall; Much older now but still so young Once again we wait; For the sun to sink Determined now, our future will be great. Unforgettable Sun fall Now in our golden years Once again we wait; For that amazing sight Knowing now our future is sealed Waiting out our final years.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2014 3:37:00 PM

oh this is so beautiful Joey it flows so wonderfully from verse to verse - am not quite in my golden years yet lol:-) Rated a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/30/2014 8:33:00 AM

Beautifully written. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.

Joey Peters
Date: 11/30/2014 12:08:00 PM

Thank You.

Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 11:20:00 PM

JOEY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2014 6:14:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Joey - I choose your first beautiful and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)