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unforgettable evening

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unforgettable evening

On a golden sun kissed evening we met on a hill,
Her looks were shy and laugh was shrill,
Her skin was fair, and her smile was a ghost,
And among the things I lost I miss my heart the most,
She stole my words and since, I have been trying to find,
Which cotton cloud she has been hiding behind,
She hides so subtly behind a screen, 
Of my words and thoughts, not to be seen,
Yet I feel her presence everywhere I go,
Gentle, ethereal, just a hint, no more.
She is in the colors that I paint; she is in the songs that I sing,
She is in everywhere, and she hides in every- thing.
The setting sun had turned her curly hair to crimson flames,
The evening shadows danced on her dress playing their games,
The evening breeze, blowing softly above,
Witnessed silently as I fell in love,
her looks were shy and her laugh was shrill.
I remember well the day. We met on that hill.

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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 12:44:00 PM
    This is the kind of poetry I love. Sweet, romantic and dreamy. Thank you for going through my work. I do appreciate your visits. :)

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 8/5/2015 3:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so very much this is very helpful, the encouragement..thanks
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 1:44:00 AM
    I like thiss :DD It's so romantic and very realistically described ... Aww >w< ... Keep on writing...

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 7/12/2013 1:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it is a true story :-)