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Unfinished

Daisy was a dog owner’s delight She never fought and didn’t bite. But she ate some bad food Putting her in a mean mood. The result is too tragic to write.

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:44:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/28/2015 6:30:00 PM

Funom, please know I couldn't be more grateful for your kind, encouraging words. Thank you for your support and for taking time to write. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2015 11:09:00 AM

aww - good but sad - Paul you need to enter the limerick contest - do check it out and see if you can come up with a cracker:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/22/2015 11:40:00 PM

Jan, as ever and always, thank you. I took your counsel and entered Catie's L&H limerick contest. Then, I looked at my entry 12 hours later and deleted it. Ugh, it was awful. Maybe I'll make a second run at it, Catie/rules permitting.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/21/2015 10:42:00 AM

good one Paul

Tim Smith
Date: 5/28/2015 6:42:00 PM

I'm at the baseball fields....I'll come up with something later : )

Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/28/2015 6:39:00 PM

Thanks, Tim. I want you to know I'm looking forward to reading your limerick about onion breath. As I mentioned earlier, I'm confident--in your gifted hands--that will have the makings of a classic.