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Undying Question

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Undying Question

A tin of chocolates
The sun slowly retreating
In beautiful flame

A glance in secret
The firm push of resolution
Butterflies dancing

Girlie smile
The light of welcome
At last --"Will you be mine?"

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  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:03:00 PM
    Congrats on the winners circle. I thought yours was a very well crafted set of haiku!!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Isalah. An awesome poem my friend. Connie

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on another fine win, Isaiah!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:59:00 PM
    ISAIAH, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 2:07:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Very well written..If for a contest, it should be in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 11:17:00 AM
    so here is your really sweet side. I am liking it mucho!! love that title too.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:49:00 AM
    No girlie can resist chocolates and poetry.Im sure she d say yes.At last valentines virus completely got ya cowboy :).zz Lovely poem full of rpmance and churning butterflies.tmfvs

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:45:00 AM
    No girlie can resists chocolates and poetry so im sure she would say yes.Dont fotget a rose sssh:)..Lovely valentine virus..It got ya at last Cowboy:-$ zB-).Very romantic valentine poem and wonderful butterflies churning reminded me of my teenage days..tmfvs

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 2:15:00 PM
    this is very lovely and i like the title you've chosen...