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Undesired Rain

Rain on rooftop gently pelts and slowly drips; beneath the gust-battered brenches owls complain... cooing and lamenting not to make it stay, unless it tapers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/29/2012 8:34:00 PM
ANDREW.,,, NICE IMAGE..THANK YOU 4 SHARING, ALWAYS~PD
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:26:00 AM
enjoyed the curved ball in the end, andrew... well-crafted.. congrats on your selene win! :) huggs!
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:07:00 AM
This poem is a pleasure to read Andrew,thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:03:00 AM
Whoooo cares and why should I care?
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