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Understepping Poem Four

I choose the path on which I travel. I am facing the world without fear. Hope is in understanding the words The exceeding love colored with grace Splendored the time with marvelous verse Half life written on poetry path Awakening precious World of Soup To understand how this form works and to find the hidden line read explanation in my "Understepping Poem Two". This poem was written in Collaboration with my friend Yanny. Also check out her poem of the same name once you decipher the imbedded message.

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Date: 12/31/2012 8:08:00 PM
And I am too!! (replying to your hidden message) These are great fun. Happy New Year to you.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2012 8:44:00 PM
Would this be a love Triangle??? lol
Date: 12/28/2012 4:26:00 PM
great collaboration xoxo pd
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/28/2012 7:02:00 PM
Thanks

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