Underneath

Useless No good Destined to fail Empty feelings Remebering who i was Nothing left of me now Emotions cloud my head Agony in my heart Turning for direction, but end up in circles Hurting more than imaginable

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Allan Granstrom

Date: 5/24/2009 4:53:00 AM

I can feel your pain and I pray your not feeling it anymore. Prayer helps, Jessica,and time heals. Love the poem though and I hope when you write down your pain it helps you cope like it does for me. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I really appreciate it.

Emily Kroeger

Date: 5/20/2009 12:20:00 PM

Wow your better then me Jess really you are

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 5/20/2009 7:09:00 AM

I hope this poem does not reflect your expereinces.All in all I love the structure and the emotions you add to each word such as:NO good instead of bad,or MORE THAN imaginable instead of unbelievable.Please keep those kinds of skills and usage.It makes a poet like you with so skills,Great:)

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/19/2009 2:46:00 PM

WOW ALOT OF PAIN IN YOUR WORDS LIFE GOES ON TRUST ME I KNOW KEEP WRITING