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Under the Willow Trees

A path strewn thick with ruddy-faced leaves led to nowhere and everywhere in fantasies, our near-death rescue from boredom come afternoon chores and homework pages wrinkled in time. I try to recall all I tried to forget. Back home, under the willow trees, I weep for childhood, friendship, for innocence surrendered, all I thought I could keep, fuzzy lines between love and loss, practical days that come with age. I close my eyes to see through tears - you, a dance in rain showers, oval-spheres of costume jewelry, tea parties and dragons slain rays of sunlight climbed, imagination uncaged, carefree hours, diamonds in darkness, restless dreams fell like leaves on youth's horizon of trees and flowers. Two kids set free in skies shaded gray - we said forever, a pinky swear I remember, naïve in make-believe worlds. How many years passed by, miles kept between you and I? A phone call once-in-a-while reminded of our bitter, listless eyes, our disappointment in distant words. I hope you always knew the truth, I loved you, dear friend. It was myself, I hated. Time cradled our laughter, held it on the breeze, childhood secrets shared with ease on our path, thick with summer's dead leaves. We, too young to notice, fell into brittle leaves trodden bare before first snow. Our laughter now echoes in dreams, chaffing our willow trees still sulking low, moss brushes away tears in timeless beauty, and waits for you to come home. An old poem, revised 3/15/17 249 words total

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Date: 5/31/2020 10:58:00 PM
Rhonda, you should be writing novels to highlight your poetry! Your nostalgic journey back to childhood days took us with you with the deep feelings you expressed. This piece showcases your talent and is a deserving First Place winner! Congratulations my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2020 9:34:00 PM
Friends seperated by time and distance still wait "for you to come home." Reunited childhood is a precious and tender thing. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 3/30/2017 8:28:00 AM
Amazing write Rhonda.
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Date: 3/16/2017 7:44:00 PM
Lovely, flowing, bittersweet! Congrats on your placement, Rhonda! Janice
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Date: 3/16/2017 6:58:00 PM
Rhonda--- the more I read your verses the more I fall in love with your beautiful pen. It is made of gold and you are a true poetess in perfection...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:43:00 PM
RHONDA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:13:00 AM
This is going straight to my favorites, right after I stop crying. Some of my best memories of my sister are of me and her in our make believe world under a weeping willow before death took her. I am still waiting for her to come home but she only crosses the distance in my dreams.
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:42:00 AM
Rhonda, I absolutely adore this magnificent poem!!.... Simply outstanding imagery and feelings expressed... So happy to have found this to add to my face... Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/27/2015 10:35:00 AM
We are always naive in our make-believe world Rhonda. Love.>Your friend rajat
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Date: 1/27/2015 9:29:00 AM
I enjoyed my walk with you this morning under the weeping willows trees. This was my dad's favorite tree . . . sweet are these memories. Nature has a way of wrapping memories and love together to reminds us of all of our blessings received. Lovely dear friend. 7
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:29:00 PM
This takes me back...and that's the way things go...I miss so many old friends, but we move on through life and make new ones. Still, we like to think about the old ones, as well.
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Date: 1/25/2015 11:52:00 AM
your heartfelt piece is riveting, Rhonda..friendship is a precious gift, and that is why your words flow so easily as time's treasure... beautiful sentiments abound!.. huggs
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:42:00 AM
Rhonda, your poem is just lovely, so filled with childhood adventure and life long friendship that time and distance can never erase and thanks for visiting my poetry, I really appreciate your comment ~~
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:03:00 AM
So beautiful Rhonda and also heartfelt.. The growing apart of two childhood mates...thank you for the nice comment on my Cupids Arrow collaboration... Hugs Tim
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Date: 1/25/2015 5:03:00 AM
Very beautiful pen Rhonda! I enjoyed your piece my dear friend. Willows trees are so mysterious and nice.Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^
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