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Under the Surface

Look under the surface of the ocean fat cucumbers lazily stirring amidst vast reefs of multicoloured coral hermit crabs scuttling to the next rock Shoals of tiny fish darting in and out the shadow of the hunting shark a star fish drifts on the tide's turn sharp spines of the urchin await ready to spike unwary bare feet the inky jet of a disturbed squid Wondrous formations abound covered with oysters and clams arches too small for us to follow beware of the moray eels lurking what fascinating wonders are displayed as you watch another almost alien world

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Date: 9/25/2013 6:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your underwater adventure..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/25/2013 11:10:00 AM
hi Sara lol glad you enjoyed Ty Shadow x smile
Date: 8/15/2013 4:59:00 AM
beautiful imagery Shadow...very nicely penned...best wishes
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Date: 9/25/2013 11:09:00 AM
hi Joseph and ty dear much appreciate your feedback Shadow x smile

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