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Under the Summer Sky

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Under the Summer Sky

Please, grant me the vision of thirsty eyes
To drink in the golden summer hour
Poised in splendor, beneath the wind swept skies

Where crows circle low, insistent with cries
Where meadows are ablaze with wildflower
Please, grant me the vision of thirsty eyes

Where brown cattle feed, on the green grass tides
Beneath tall oaks, crowned with ancient power
Poised in splendor, beneath the wind swept skies

The steep hilled slopes, where purple lupine thrive
Scenting warm air with sweet fragrant showers
Poised in splendor, beneath the wind swept skies

The day stretches out with a yawning sigh
I drink in the golden summer hour
Please, grant me the vision of thirsty eyes
Poised in splendor, beneath the wind swept skies

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  1. Date: 6/14/2010 3:32:00 PM
    Great, vivid imagery here, nothing is better than trying to convey the beauty of ones surroundings with the power of prose, great shot here. Regards, Gavin.

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 12:57:00 AM
    You certainly have been gifted with a poet's observation Carrie.Keep drinking your fill.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 7:58:00 PM
    Hi Carrie :) this is just wonderful! I totally loved the refrains that you used! I can't help but want to pray for that too! You sure are a talented writer :)--wish you the best in the contest --nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 1:11:00 PM
    Great Villanelle..Excellent topic and repeat lines..Good luck in the contest if an entry..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 11:55:00 AM
    This is truly beautiful, Carrie, I felt as though, I was right there. I just love nature, and you painted a lovely picture with your words. This is a winner. Love Constance

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 11:49:00 AM
    This is absolutely beautiful. You commanded the form perfectly.

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 9:37:00 AM
    Simply stated beautiful. Thank you for showing us this beauty through your eyes. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 10:07:00 PM
    This is a really beautiful Villanelle write, Carrie! Very colorful imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 8:09:00 PM
    OH WOWWWWWW, This is one awesome villanelle, Carrie. "the day stretches out with a yawning sigh" GREAT line. Favs for this one!

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 7:27:00 PM
    Thanks for supporting my contest

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 5:43:00 PM
    Beautiful! Your artistry is both stunning and breathtaking.So proud to know you as my PSoup friend. You're extremely gifted. Peace and hugs, John

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 3:42:00 PM
    Very nice carrie , much inspiration!~Rick

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 3:36:00 PM
    I absolutely love this form.. this is outstanding work..your line is beautiful...BG

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 3:35:00 PM
    Well done Carrie, enjoyed your poetry. have yourself a nice one,..p.d.