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Under the Rose Trellis

. Running Pale Pink Rose On the trellis grows_ soft scent_ Wafts on morning air Under rose trellis You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful Lips that taste of rose

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Raul Moreno

Date: 6/3/2010 11:33:00 PM

Wow, nice choka SK...I must certainly favor this one. I loved the title and the context as a whole...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/13/2010 12:31:00 PM

naughty!! but beautifully romantic work!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/12/2010 10:26:00 PM

Aww, how sweet and charming write, Sara. Loved this choka very much. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your great comments on my poem too. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2010 6:35:00 PM

Glad u enjoyed my recent Sestina poem but its not my entry for the contest... just an expression of how I was feeling and dealing with issues of this "romance" today.. appreciate your reading my poetry Sara and for your always uplifting comments too..luv.. Linda-Marie..

James Fraser

Date: 5/12/2010 1:52:00 PM

Sara, this is quite beautiful. You know i love Roses in poems and this one is just lovely. Have a wonderful evening >> James

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/12/2010 11:59:00 AM

I love roses and to steal a kiss. Nice. God Bless Phyl

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 5/12/2010 11:46:00 AM

i like this very much its really beautiful!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2010 8:19:00 AM

Tender and beautiful words Sara and u could just see the trellis in your lines so full of imagery.. enjoyed reading this creative write today..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/12/2010 7:42:00 AM

Lovely romatic Choka, Sara! I once walked through the Sinai Desert and saw also some fata morgans and saw people walking but there was noboby there and when you came closer, they were walking further away. Interesting illusion of hot air! Thank you for your comments and keep your pen flowing...Gert

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/12/2010 7:01:00 AM

Oh, Sara...this is quite lovely!! Nice!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2010 6:49:00 AM

Uplifting and romantic! How lucky is she who captures a kiss beneath the rose trellis. Very nice image, Sara. Love, Carolyn