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Under the Pine At 3am In the Fog

idea: a poem based on- on the - the frame of talking when you’re talking to a group and you don’t wanna you don’t wanna pinpoint anybody out so you say something like ok, so kyle will be the frontman and paul will be the bassline and frank will be the one - who is the spy. that sort of thing. but make a poem like that like transition from that commanding type of thing where ok – you! you’re gonna go this way (no no you – because I always do I don’t care about the thing. wh whatareyou talkingabout! ehn I don’t care about “Mastermind” that’s bullcrap I I just wanna do because I wanna and what I do then I do something like this: I change the tone into you’re confessional or into the poem-type structure of how you wish you could have said it but you couldn’t actually speak it out

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Date: 9/19/2009 9:50:00 AM
And what were we smoking under the pine at 3 A.M. in the fog? ... LOL ... What a wonderful title and a great write here ...love the idea and demonstration of "conversational" poetry!
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