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Under the Lampost

Walking in the park alongside you. Lake reflecting dusk of changing hue. Unsaid words saying it all. And there beyond the horizon the sun seemed to fall. Entwined fingers envisage our soul's propinquity. Twinkling starts conveying our love through infinity. Under the lampost facing the water we stood. Huddled together your head on my shoulder felt good. Your silken hair danced with the graceful breeze. Enthralled by your beauty even the sylph you seemed to please. Secluded and safe is how I felt in your embrace. And how I felt divinity right in that place. Now when I dare open my eyes, I know you have left without any goodbyes. And here I stand under the same lampost, Shedding tears of the past, missing you the most.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/23/2017 9:21:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one. A tremendous first piece.
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Date: 7/7/2017 1:03:00 PM
Your feelings in words,good .
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Date: 7/2/2017 5:31:00 PM
oh this is so sad and romantic. Love these kinds of poems, Shubham. It was good seeing your first post here.
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 7/2/2017 6:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness, Andrea!!
Date: 6/30/2017 2:16:00 PM
feeling of missing someone nicely framed and tangled in rows..loved it
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 7/1/2017 1:11:00 AM
Thank you manu!!!
Date: 6/18/2017 3:46:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Shubham! Your lovely poem reflects a deep love and loss that is profound. This is beautiful! Blessings and Aloha, Connie
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 6/18/2017 4:19:00 AM
Heartfelt Gratitude Connie! Thank you for your kindness and blessings :) shubham
Date: 2/16/2017 10:51:00 AM
What a wonderful write Shubham!! The joy...the longing..."even the sylph you seemed to please." I like the imagination of this line ;) Well done. Best wishes in your continued writing. Deb
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 2/16/2017 11:23:00 AM
THANK YOU Deb!!!! Your regards really mean a lot... And yes, more is yet to come :) Thanks for the visit though :) Shubham
Date: 1/9/2017 2:15:00 PM
Very poignant, Shubham...And very lovely also! My best regards! :) john
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 1/10/2017 1:43:00 AM
Thank u sir, more is yet to come. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs