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Under the Castle

Under the castle hid from all The dungeon was dark, crowded and small Held by our captors hid from view Wasting away as prisoners do The dungeon keeper was the most vile of men Born and bred to punish our sins Outside the children run and play Lost in the excitement of a brand new day My mind drifts back to my days as a child Just a rambunctious boy with a demeanor so wild As I grew older it was clear to see The world was a playground waiting for me I sought all its pleasures tasted its wine Lost sight of my roots as I fell from the vine As I reflect back on all I have seen I allowed myself to become angry and mean I gathered some homeboys my personal crew And proceeded to do what men shouldn’t do Then way deep in my memory I pulled up a name Which, was followed by an ocean of shame To eat of his fruit I had such a hunger So I decided to no longer be a warmonger Separated from my gang I walked alone in the halls Hung my picture of Jesus on my cell wall Fell to my knees and called out his name And released from my soul an ocean of pain That gave me the strength to write out my truth Making me a man who protects the innocence of youth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/8/2008 11:49:00 AM
a beautiful message Michael. a wonderful piece you wrote. thank you for reading my An Angel Fell from the sky. and for your comment
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Date: 6/15/2008 11:47:00 AM
This one nails it right on the head. The message is potent. I like the testimonial and how it comes across. Keep writing it out of your system. Remember that St. Paul was once Saul. God has a job for all His saints. Great job! ~ Joseph
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Date: 6/11/2008 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful write..Penned with passion..Thanks for sharing.. TYOne, Farah
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Date: 6/11/2008 7:48:00 AM
Michael, You bring tears to my eyes everytime I read one of your poems. The truth you are unashamed to share with the world is a sign of a man who knows and has been blessed by God. God Bless you my special son. Mom Beer
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Date: 6/10/2008 9:26:00 AM
Michael, as I always believe, our roads may always be different or bad, but when we have arrived at a destination that was sought after, we can look back and be grateful we traveled those roads to begin with. Love the flow and rhyme and the message that comes through clearly in this. Michael
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