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Under My Umbrella a Collab

~*~ With one umbrella and two hands we cover each other Eyes so deep and hungry cry for peace to crawl out from under Shoulders hug as the rain falls like closed curtains on a window A place to rest my worries and share a smile that brings a glow I slow my steps so this walk won't end on the next corner Do I dare touch her hand or let this moment flow like water ~*~ Under one umbrella, two hands come together The warmth outshining the bitter weather I gave him a smile that showed I cared Worries are halved when worries are shared As rain pitter patters above our heads Over the umbrella's edge we watch it trickle like cotton threads I We talk of happiness, hopes and fears Our pace slows as the corner nears But It's ok to let your fingers slip For there are no corners in our friendship.. A collab with Tracie Indigo Dreamweaver ~*~

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Date: 12/30/2011 7:35:00 AM
Michael well done you and Tracie make this flow just fine..David
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:44:00 PM
you guys rock,,just amazing,,i enjoyed it so....
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:23:00 PM
I had a lot of fun writing with you Michael.. Thank- you xxx
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:37:00 PM
This reminds me a bit of the hit song of yesteryear "Bus Stop", by the Hollies. Good descriptive rhyming couplets here.
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Date: 12/27/2011 11:55:00 AM
A very nice collab you have here. :-) I had to also stop by your page to let you know.You both did a great job...
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:18:00 AM
It's like two sides poem, I enjoyed this so much! I think the boy wants this more than friendship. This reminds me of novel I red which told story from more than one perspectives, but they'll come together at the end. Btw, I love your every lines Michael. Thanks for your sweetest comments on my page. Hug, Dinda :)
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Date: 12/27/2011 12:49:00 AM
Stunning collaboration between yourself and Tracie, MJF! Really enjoyed the flow and beauty of it!! Love W
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Date: 12/26/2011 8:32:00 PM
this is beautiful and sweet..good collabo you did here! love,Deb
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Date: 12/26/2011 7:28:00 PM
beautiful job the two of you did. cory
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/26/2011 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Cory!! It was a fun write.

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