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Unconditional Love

Unconditional Love By Jack Horne and Beth Winchcombe We’ve been through this a thousand times! What can I say to make you see? The love I felt for you has died - I’m sorry, you’re not right for me. You made me laugh! You made me cry! Now it seems you’ve gone away! I should hate you, BUT, Love and hate are much akin. I know you want another chance, But feel we’ve had that one last try! I never meant to break your heart. It tears me up to see you cry. I’m missing you so much Already, You heartless swine! Leaving me alone! Why did you come into my life If you didn’t mean to stay? Unless I owned a crystal ball, How could I know how it would end? I love you still - but not enough! I know your broken heart will mend. What I felt for you Is liken to a tap I just can't turn it off. You're nothing but a whimp, A bastard, A womaniser, Someone I should hate! Can't you see what you've done to me? I wish now that we'd never met! Sadly though I'd still forgive you. I've got myself a dog, he won't let me down! Unconditional love, that's what I need right now!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/29/2012 2:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jack. Enjoyed your collaboration. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/28/2012 8:55:00 AM
wow wow Jack congrats on a super second place win .. excellent my friend.. always awesome..
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:50:00 PM
I sure remember this one. You did really great with your partner, jack. Big Congrats to the both of you.
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:59:00 PM
yes how can we ever know how long anything will last,,still we must have hope,nice win! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:27:00 AM
Jack and Beth congrats on your win, I like the format and construction of it, but is it fiction?..David
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:15:00 AM
Fabulous show of your passions and feelings in this situation... Congratulations on the win... The results of a broken relationship couldn't have been said better.
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations to you both!! Love the poem!! Tis true, a dog will never let you down. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/27/2012 12:58:00 AM
JACK, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/17/2012 11:57:00 AM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Jack. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:35:00 AM
Very imaginative and heart felt write. Great collaboration.
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:44:00 AM
Appealing with heart, wonderful write, thanks, bl
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:38:00 AM
Very good well done to the both of you x
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:59:00 PM
You made a good team with this write. This is admirable.
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:40:00 PM
lovely collab Jack.. awesome lines of poetic art my friend... good luck..
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Date: 1/15/2012 7:27:00 PM
oh, the woes of it all, and she is right to get a dog. haha. this was a cute idea between you two. I enjoyed it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/15/2012 6:46:00 PM
Bravo! both of you has made a heartfelt yet strangely humorously appealing with this piece. 'You heartless swine!' LoL, would love to be able to say that too =D
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