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Uncommon Senses

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Below is the poem entitled Uncommon Senses which was written by poet John Barbetta. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Uncommon Senses

                                                                              Nature
My eyes sip the lemon sea
I inhale its salty spice
and the sugar sweet bouquet of wild roses
I taste the juicy sunset orange
and the mist of farewell tears chills my heart
I touch the silk purple coverlet clouds
and smooth them over restive waves.
I listen to the pulse of the cold blue star
and sing a silent song of longing
I reach up to embrace the gathering truth
I kiss the unabashed face of mother moon
I know the cause of every wrinkle.
I fall into a sated state
Dream and yet awakened
I have a sense of time and self and place
I need only to savor the manna of nature
To sustain my spiritual life.
                                                                          Revelation

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  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:45:00 PM
    A wonderful first write! Welcome to poetry soup, please don't hesitate to ask if you need help. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 10:39:00 PM
    as a person who appreciates nature this was an enjoyable read for me as I can acquaint to the elements, lovely write and thanks for sharing. Hope you feel at home at the soup and more to come.

    Barbetta Avatar John Barbetta
    Date: 1/28/2013 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your encouragement. I sat on a terrace in the Algarve, Portugal transfixed by the sunset's farewell. I dreamed. I wrote. I shared. I hope to experience nature through your mind's eye. jlB
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 6:58:00 PM
    Wow! This is so beautiful. I had to read it twice to savor the richness of the imagery. I am adding it to my "Favs List". Thanks for sharing, John. Annalise

    Barbetta Avatar John Barbetta
    Date: 1/28/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Annalise, Thank you for your interest and encouragement. I am working on a book of poetry and photo art, Vital Signs. You can google information:jlbarbetta. I am anxious to experience the world through your sensitive eyes.