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Unbridled desire

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Unbridled desire

fresh linen
and jasmine
gently caress
the air

sheets whisper
to the floor,
with abandon
searching lips
find an orb

traveling fingers
part the way
legs jelly
and feet tingle
the lighting rod
is stroked

all sane movement
ceased, tremors pass
into the centre of desire
shuddering I am loosed 

a ragged breath
lifts wayward hair
slicked in lust
and splayed 
I wished
I had a smoke

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 9:40:00 AM
    Having a peep at your past poems, Jayne; this sure is unbridled and sensual. Give it a top rating. // paul

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    Date: 5/20/2014 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aww thank you Paul, I am just roaming around I might go have a look at what else you have been writing :) thanks for the interest its surprising but appreciated big Jayne x
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:50:00 PM
    Excellent sultry one here. Gosh, you make me wish I'I' had a smoke. Very well done, Jayne. Merry Christmas! Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:16:00 AM
    A lovely poem, thank you Jayne. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)