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Unbridled Desire

fresh linen and jasmine gently caress the air sheets whisper to the floor, with abandon searching lips find an orb traveling fingers part the way legs jelly and feet tingle the lighting rod is stroked all sane movement ceased, tremors pass into the centre of desire shuddering I am loosed a ragged breath lifts wayward hair slicked in lust and splayed I wished I had a smoke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/20/2014 9:40:00 AM
Having a peep at your past poems, Jayne; this sure is unbridled and sensual. Give it a top rating. // paul
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 5/20/2014 9:44:00 AM
aww thank you Paul, I am just roaming around I might go have a look at what else you have been writing :) thanks for the interest its surprising but appreciated big smile...love Jayne x
Date: 12/9/2012 7:16:00 AM
A lovely poem, thank you Jayne. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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