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o, unbidden rain, I welcome you to my garden the flowers are thirsty . . . . . we have been w a i t i n g for you the cosmos, daisies and red roses are hanging their heads F A L L rain with glistening drops, gentle and with deep love kiss each sweet petal and tender leaf the vines are reaching out their tendrils t w i n i n g and curling o, the pleasant petrichor scent, the delightful drip, dripping can you hear the flowers s i n g i n g even a green frog yells out . . . thanks, do come again rain rain, come our way again . . . _________________ June 5, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Unbidden Copyright Protected, ID 16-845-178-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to, Contest 232 sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 11/5/2016 6:46:00 PM
Yay!! You did well in Brian's contest with this one. So awesome. I can see how it won a top placement. Congrats, Constance.
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Date: 11/3/2016 8:39:00 AM
Great photo. Great line "even a frog yells out..." Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/3/2016 4:52:00 AM
Dear Constance, This is so beautiful and whimsical. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Lainey.
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Date: 11/2/2016 8:07:00 PM
Something that I love very much and we just don't get enough of anymore. Lovely poem. Great hearing it out loud. It really comes alive with the f a lling.
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Date: 11/1/2016 11:51:00 PM
Can feel the touch of rain on my face ... Very nice poem ...
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Date: 11/1/2016 7:47:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic! Constance! To my faves!
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Date: 11/1/2016 5:02:00 PM
Cleverly written, love 'the pleasant petrichor scent' it's a beautiful rendition for the season. Really like this.
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