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I thought blood was supposed to be thicker than the glass of water you drink But this glass of water and few pain medications plus a couple of stress pills serve its purpose With my body feeling numb with a lot of ballistic thoughts still feeling like love lost all over again running thru my veins So many negative thoughts in my mind I Can’t erase the image even the turbulence of this plane can’t change my direction Summer breeze feels so good outside but my inner thoughts inside of me are so glowing hot a blind mind can feel my pains A trouble heart a trouble mind can’t depart from my trouble past still have lot of anger and my feelings are built with gush of emotional insert in my head You will know my deepest thoughts that agonizing me everyday day to day time to time/ My unconscious mind it runs tricks on me my/ illusion are perhaps on my mind is playing tricks on me once again time and time again "JCMT"

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Date: 10/16/2013 9:06:00 AM
These are true feelings that you feel. Remember that nothing lasts forever. Tomorrow is another day. Smile someone loves you... Lucilla
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:50:00 PM
I feel this one. Frustrating, disheartening.
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Date: 9/25/2013 8:10:00 PM
Sometimes it is hard to live in this crazy world. We make choices and then set them against our future. We struggle with our demons and hope every day to see some sunshine. You wrote your heart and I give you credit for that. Allan
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Date: 8/22/2013 4:12:00 AM
It's sad to read something like this, knowing very much the feeling. Sad it is, though always good to remember and connect this in essence is very deep, possibly the best thing a poem can be in my opinion. And that first line is brilliant! "I thought blood was supposed to be thicker than the glass of water you drink" Very nice poem
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Christopher Michaels
Date: 9/10/2013 12:25:00 AM
thanks, Check out my poem "Sand Castle"
Date: 8/22/2013 2:50:00 AM
- Very touching and sad written,Christopher.... - All the best to you!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Christopher Michaels
Date: 8/22/2013 3:39:00 AM
Thanks for reading Love the Reponse This is just the beginning Beginning "JCMT"

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