Un-

Un ____________________ I want to unknow you, I want to uncare I want to unshow you I want to unshare. I want to unlove you, I want to untry I want to unforgive I want to uncry. I want to unhold you, I want to undo this I want to unremember I want to undo that first kiss. 9/20/14- Jessica Thompson ( I wrote this for people out there wishing they never met that person that broke their hearts. I'm sure everyone has once in their life )

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Cal Bambi The Word Artist

Date: 5/24/2022 10:36:00 AM

This is the second time I have commented on your poem Un- Simple words with a BIG message. It's strange that the only person who can stop you from crying it the person who made you cry in the first place. Cal Bambi

Jt Nyx
Date: 5/30/2022 9:14:00 AM

Hi there again Cal, very nice to see ya. You are right when it comes to this kind of thing happening. I hope all is well with you. Jess :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 3/13/2022 10:18:00 AM

An amazing write!!!

Jt Nyx
Date: 3/14/2022 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, Swetha. Have a great day! Jess

James Inman

Date: 3/8/2022 8:48:00 PM

I guess I like the sad ones. Nice write.

Jt Nyx
Date: 3/9/2022 3:11:00 PM

Ty James, Have a good one :) Jess

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 3/8/2022 3:24:00 PM

Creative spin on the prefix called un!

Jt Nyx
Date: 3/9/2022 3:11:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer :) Hope you have a great day! Jess

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/7/2022 10:57:00 AM

Awe the agony of a broken heart. Been there! We reinvent ourselves and go on! great rhyme...Jessica...glad your poems came to my mail!

Jt Nyx
Date: 3/7/2022 5:31:00 PM

Hi there Anaya! Yeah, a broken heart sure can cause a lot of heartaches. You are deff right when saying we reinvent ourselves and go on. I am also glad my poems reached you. Thank you for stopping in to leave a kind word. Take care and have a great week. Jess

Cal Bambi The Word Artist

Date: 3/7/2022 9:53:00 AM

Jessica, This poem speaks for a lot of people, me included. Isn't it wonderful what we all can do with words. Very well written. We have all had these thoughts. Thanks for putting them to paper for us. Well done.

Jt Nyx
Date: 3/7/2022 5:28:00 PM

Hello there Cal, I am really glad you enjoyed reading this poem. I know we have all been there a time or few I am sure. I hope you have a great week. Jess :)

Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 10/18/2014 7:47:00 AM

Yes that is exactly how I feel towards my x of whom I was married for 22 years. Except for my children I wish that I had never met her.

Jt Nyx
Date: 10/18/2014 10:38:00 AM

I think we have all be there at some point in our lives. I wish you the very best and hope you have a much better experience with someone else. Thank you for stopping in :) Take care, Jess :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/29/2014 5:02:00 PM

I find the concept for this poem excellent. I am going to give this a seven and add this to my favs.

Jt Nyx
Date: 10/18/2014 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Maurice for your kind words. I just felt like everyone at one time or another has felt this kind of heartache. I hope today finds you well. Take care, Jess :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2014 12:25:00 PM

what a sad sad write Jessica, as you say I guess we have all felt like this at some stage in our lives - its a 7 from me! hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2014 12:14:00 PM

I'm doing fab thanks Jessica:-) hope you are too ... not seen you around for a while:-( Hugs jan xx

Jt Nyx
Date: 9/21/2014 12:02:00 PM

Thank you Jan, for stopping in and leaving a kind comment. I hope you are doing well. Tc my friend, Jess :)