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Uderstand Why

I want someone to hear me, I want someone to listen, actually understand what i'm trying to say. I try and talk to you. But u never understand. I tell you and tell you,over and over again. Why dont you listen or, even try to understand. Your actions and tones, are killing me inside. Father and father you, push me aside. Till one day i will no longer be by your side. Than maybe only maybe will you understand that i love you from deep down inside. But still you never even try to understand why, i feel the way i feel inside. 12/11/2010

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Date: 12/17/2010 2:23:00 PM
I understand how you feel.. give it time.. everything just needs time... And often actions speak louder than words, so maybe try speaking to him with your actions rather than your words. And perhaps keep in mind that there are some things you can't change, like other people for instance. You only have control over yourself and the way you respond to things. Some things you just have to let go. Best of luck to you... Dana'lynn
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:23:00 AM
can feel the heartache. well written
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:19:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jacquelyn. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:06:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv...
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