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U-R the Calm To My Storm...

Unrest is the tempestous, world seems out of favor... malignant beseem the superflous, sour,ill-tempered neighbors... But... The grass is always greener, at your side of our choosing... you've made me a believer, love's hallmark unites fusing... You are, The soft to my hard a sheath for my sword, like whisperings of a bard you are the calm to my storm....

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Farah Chamma

Date: 10/3/2008 11:03:00 AM

That is beautiful beautiful Jay..I don't know how I missed this piece:) I loved the last four lines very much... Always, Farah

Bruce Cummings

Date: 9/23/2008 7:44:00 PM

this is truly a beautiful piece, i love it

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 9/22/2008 1:11:00 AM

Jay, when ur poetry is so good that people relate and it strikes cords then I would say you have succeeded. This is truly one of the best poems I have read, though many of your piees are like that. Funny when you put yourself surrounded by mirrors, the negativity does go from you on the outside but if you hoard a little bit of negativity caused by fear it then mirrors to you. Formal appologies, Cindy

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 9/21/2008 9:59:00 AM

I read this several times and though you told me it was a philosophical write, I can see clearly it is not. naeve yes, plain dumb, no... (honesty is golden), city slicker....

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/14/2008 8:08:00 AM

Oh Jay, someone is very lucky. Truly beautiful. Love your style. And thank you for such a truly thoughtful and heart warming comment. So glad to know you too sweet Jay, in the here and now, too. Love, Shar xoxo

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/14/2008 4:21:00 AM

Beautifully written, like Rhoda said - this is like a whisper in the ear, so lovely! love Kristin

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/13/2008 4:31:00 PM

Jay an outstanding poem - Always so much said in so few words - I detect a note of true love in this poem - Has Jay found true love? I hope so because it is what your poem so clearly states and you deserve that - God Bless

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/13/2008 12:00:00 PM

great work. i'm almost tempted to copy it and slip it under someones door and see what happens. John H Loving III