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Typhoon Yolanda

So many cities flattened by angry waves wind-borne suffering. [Originally penned as response to someone's poem here, but altered a tiny bit]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 9:12:00 AM
intimidating haiku... enjoyed...PD
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Date: 11/27/2013 3:31:00 AM
i think i am that someone??..thanks Jim, that is so true and the city needs time to heal.. >>with hugs charmane
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Jim Tidd
Date: 11/27/2013 10:24:00 AM
Indeed. I guess you could say your poem inspired a poetic response. What better for poetry? :)

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