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Two Souls Drawn Together

Isn't it wonderful when a comment can make you smile Especially about something you like so far from home Isn't it wonderful that this comment can take you miles This venturing adventure to allow ones heart to roam Isn't it wonderful when a smile greets you in arrivals Your name is called to you by someone you long to see Isn't it wonderful that out there, there's romantic survival Two souls drawn together, Church becomes their we Isn't it wonderful when chatting histories of their pasts Attracts them even closer allowing their hearts to touch Isn't it wonderful that knowing their days are going to last Sharing a closeness loving bond, in every day they clutch Isn't it wonderful as I look back at the scenes I've shared So memorable was this vacation that it's only just the start Isn't it wonderful that through a comment loves declared Two souls drawn together sharing each others hearts .

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Date: 4/16/2015 10:31:00 PM
P.S....James....talking about having the women smitten......! You've got it covered my friend ! Much love, james
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James Fraser
Date: 4/18/2015 10:51:00 AM
I've certainly been smitten by a lovely Poetess James, much Love back to you and Noah, James :) :)
Date: 4/16/2015 10:29:00 PM
Mine lips are making all kinds of sounds I can't spell, yet again with another of your writes my poetic friend ! SMOKING ! HOT ! I feel this way everytime that I ride our commuter trains here in Philly. Believe it or not.....many of those "Bright eyes" and "Hips" which I write about, are heavily done on those trains. Oh, I gotta go...ones com'n on ! I was just on the train yesterday and there wassssssss.....Have a wonderful week my dear friend ! Much love, james
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James Fraser
Date: 4/18/2015 10:50:00 AM
Bright eyes and hips, now those words sound delightful :-) James :) :)
Date: 4/16/2015 12:31:00 AM
What a lovely poem.Isn't it wonderful? : )..Fantastic!!!
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James Fraser
Date: 4/16/2015 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine. As soon as I knew how to start this, my recent vacation came to life in poetry. Smiles, James :)xx
Date: 4/15/2015 11:57:00 AM
what a racy, thrilling mood, prince .. you got me there, yes!.. go for it!.. huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 4/15/2015 1:08:00 PM
Hiya Princess, go for it I am, indeed we are, growing from a little comment, that took this guy afar. Never shall he look back, only forward he shall go. Blessed by a little comment that's allowed my heart to flow. Huggs//James :) :)
Date: 4/15/2015 6:37:00 AM
Huge James, I know and I experienced the same.. And I want to experience that again so soon..... I am praying and considering that to be granted for I believe there is willingness and that real want to realize it.. :)!!
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James Fraser
Date: 4/19/2015 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Olive, I quite like this poem, hugs//James xxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/15/2015 6:39:00 AM
I like how you did the poem, the repeating lines, it intensifies more the feeling you want to tell.. :)!!! sweet and I believe its from your heart of hearts.. :)! (((warm hugs and squeeze)))xxx//olive eloisa
Date: 4/14/2015 3:22:00 PM
It is truly a fantastic feeling James...Tim
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James Fraser
Date: 4/14/2015 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Tim, it sure is. Always appreciate your kind comments, James :)
Date: 4/14/2015 12:47:00 PM
What a lovely romantic journey you described James - when two souls meet for the first time - hopefully it will continue to be a journey of a lifetime:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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James Fraser
Date: 4/14/2015 1:47:00 PM
Evening Jan, thank you always, and yes it will continue to be a journey of a lifetime, hugs//James//xx

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