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two new tanka


Winter and cloudy 
At the hotel by the sea
Misfortune and ghosts  
No change for the gas metre
Long walks and bitter overcoat 

Anchored in the bay 
The old ship tug anchor 
No new charter 
Abandoned by her owner
Humiliating rust drips. 

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 8:06:00 AM
    Pretty sad, Jan. Sad old tug.

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 2/18/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    that´s life dear