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Two Dolphins

two dolphins swimming - an endless sea before them - frolick in rhythmic waves as they leap up to catch sun’s rays splendid torpedo bodies glide gracefully along as their world mirrors blue sky. . . . poetry flowing

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/29/2014 8:58:00 AM

Andrea What a cute and sweet write. Dolphins are very entertaining and fun to watch. I did enter some more contests and put a few more poems up. Hugs

John Freeman

Date: 6/13/2011 7:52:00 PM

Andea, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/10/2011 12:50:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your delightful win in this contest of Linda's..love, gautami

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/9/2011 12:07:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on this beauty winning in Linda's contest, love Wilma

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/9/2011 10:21:00 AM

Many congrats on your well deserved win in linda marie's contest.cheers

Jack Horne

Date: 6/9/2011 10:19:00 AM

Many congratulations on both your wins, Andrea : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2011 6:59:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your sixth place win in my contest luv..

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/26/2011 2:06:00 AM

Nice poem Ande. This 100 degree weather has us all thinking about cool water.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/25/2011 1:04:00 PM

Love this poem but then I love watching nature shows especially ocean documentaries. Should ask Carolyn if she ever caught one of those groupers. Big fish. ha ha love phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2011 8:39:00 PM

I really like this one, Andrea, and enjoyed reading it again as I prepare for my fishing trip. I'm sure you'll come up with something great for the "card" contest. Let me know when it's posted, okay? You might also think about the Goliath Grouper. (hint) Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2011 2:29:00 PM

Beautiful imagery - a definite winner. I'm still chuckling after reading your skid marks comment LOL Thanks for a good laugh before I turn in for the night : )

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/24/2011 5:36:00 AM

Oh , my my dolphins here, your fav animal I remember..love how they leap to catch sun's rays. torpedo reminds me of one very fine american swimmer, 'a lady at 40', she competed in the last olympics..coming back to your poem...awesome Andrea, for this fun and frolic theme...love again, gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2011 10:13:00 AM

Very creative and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...If the branches depend and stay entwined with the vine, there is much production of fruit...Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/23/2011 9:18:00 AM

This is such a delightful take on the challenge, Andrea! Love how you related poetry & dolphins--- you did awesome with this! Fun and frolic indeed ^_^ & yup you are so right! I never would have guessed correctly what you would have written about-- This is just so cool! Bet this is a winner! hugs to you :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/23/2011 5:49:00 AM

"in twilight thought" is just a little piece I wrote after all my birthday wonders over the weekend.. the quotation marks are at the top for the title not in the body of the poem ..I like them since we cannot use them in the titles when posting any more.. appreciate your great comments.. Ron and I are two dolphins too luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/23/2011 4:38:00 AM

Linda will surely enjoy the descriptive images-mirrors blue sky and splendid torpedo bodies...seems like the perfect match! Gwendolen

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/23/2011 3:25:00 AM

Poetry flowing indeed...a splendid write, Andrea! My wife is convinced that she was a dolphin in a previous life. Makes a refreshing change from all these people who are convinced they were kings or princesses, or some such! I think I was a fly on the rear end of a horse...not much has changed, I guess...lol! Good luck in the contest! Robert.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/22/2011 10:53:00 PM

Very nice, Andrea! Beautiful imagery! Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 9:44:00 PM

This is wonderful.The flow of three forms as a single poem is perfect.BTW who is the other Dolphin?:)

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/22/2011 2:47:00 PM

So beautiful and a fresh approach. I hope you do great;)

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 5/22/2011 2:06:00 PM

You will do great in this contest.I really like this..Have a great evening.Kacey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 1:25:00 PM

Nice perspective to use all the three words with the continuity, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 1:22:00 PM

Great description of the dolphins, Andrea. We see many of them playing in the shore here and they truly are graceful. Best wishes in the contest. Love, carolyn