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Two Dogs

“two dogs” i got two dogs but they wont run jus lay round done had their fun, so i jus sit and wait for they are my friends so great, one dog his name is blue quick as the wind he can flew, the other dog is jus plain jack runs all day at night he comes back, momma says me and dogs outside else she'll tan our sorry hide so we jus sit and wait cause momma's cookin is always great... got two dogs but they wont run jus lay round they had their fun.

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Date: 3/24/2015 12:27:00 AM
this is cute. and I like the hillbilly speech used in it!!
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Richard Poor
Date: 3/24/2015 11:37:00 AM
thank you for your kind words...I was going for the "country" aspect in this from a boys view... with my heart richard
Date: 2/12/2015 12:07:00 PM
Richard, I love this poem, the visual is so wonderful, I can see it in my mind, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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