Two Degrees of Separation

Two pressed together Like small wood chips drowned in glue No separation Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/8/2012 4:32:00 PM

Hi Russell! It makes me feel awkward to be THIS close to anyone...I gotta have my space...Perhaps this is how my 2 daughters felt while they were sharing a room in my teenie tiny home for a while..I tho't they'd kill each other!...Tho't provoking senryu which means it is done well! Hey, got my garden completely out for the season and now all I have to do is maintain the bird feeders....and you?...

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/6/2012 11:44:00 AM

Great write...

Kash Poet

Date: 5/5/2012 9:49:00 PM

A strong senryu here Russell.Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2012 9:05:00 PM

wow, that would be really pressed tight. And stuck good!! I think it could be a good thing or bad thing depending on the personality types involved. VERY interesting one, my friend.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2012 4:04:00 PM

love this strong senryu, russell

Amy Green

Date: 5/5/2012 2:25:00 PM

Darn good Senryu, my friend. Great example