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Two Bee Or Two Bee

Two bee or not two bee swarming bout me bed I swear for sure I swatted one I sure hope she is dead Oh no she must have gotten me just below my ear the swelling it is rising and I don't think I can hear I run right to the bathroom into the medicine chest grabbed my trusty epipen and stab that little pest Oh wait did I get that wrong was that shot supposed to bee for me i don't know what I'm doing and now I can barely even see The bee is still a buzzing louder than before it seems he is getting closer I run out and shut the door Tripped in a pile of laundry fell flat upon my face blood has started to trickle and my head is in a daze Oh why didn't I close that window for sure by now I'd be fast asleep dreaming of happily ever afters and not lying here in this heap

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/12/2016 10:05:00 AM

Next time do the waggle dance....

Jean Murray

Date: 11/10/2016 11:01:00 AM

When you mentioned two bees, it reminded me of a joke my father told once, about a man in a Scottish boarding house. One morning, there was honey for breakfast. He said to the landlady,"I see you keep a bee."

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/7/2016 9:34:00 AM

Stung below the ear?//At least not on the rear.//swelling chance//too big for pants//btw, can you still hear? Good 'un Tim! Stabbing the beast with the epi!!! priceless

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/7/2016 9:18:00 AM

Haha, a good one my friend, Tim! I enjoyed the story, of course not because you were attached but of your fine narration!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2016 6:42:00 PM

hmmm, sounds like someone with severe allergies to bee stings. This was cute. What made you think of it?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2016 6:41:00 PM

Tim, the flavors you mentioned of seeds are good ones. My second flavor is ranch but since I found out all the horrible ingredients the flavors are loaded with, I have given them up for the sake of my health. Let me read your poem now.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2016 12:39:00 PM

- A small bites ... which makes terrible pain, Tim - Nice poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2016 3:03:00 AM

stinging bees can cause a raucous!...i love your fun side, tim... do you have a big swatter?..huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2016 6:43:00 PM

two bee or not two bee if they sting a fat lip is the answer:-( great poem Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/5/2016 3:51:00 PM

Hope its not a true story..Lol :)...Bees are defintely beautiful to admire...but from a distance...: ).You made me smile.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2016 3:56:00 PM

I'm at my ex and she is fostering two puppies for a week until they are old enough to be adopted. The kitchen door is open since they are not trained yet and a few bees have gotten in the house.