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A give me, a sweet In a little basket, tweet Full of goodies, to eat And grass to nap on, sheet Joining the nature in harmony, meet Joining forces full of torches, wit Everyday is a treat.

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Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 3/30/2015 9:46:00 AM

Good rhyme, yayi, I personally like to tweet Nice one

Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 4/8/2015 11:17:00 PM

you too be one of a kind blessed too

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/8/2015 3:43:00 AM

Thank you Bryan. Be blessed.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/26/2015 12:08:00 PM

This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 1:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Funom for this visit.

Hannington Mumo

Date: 3/26/2015 5:46:00 AM

Your adventurous poetic style leaves a lot to be desired. Kudos!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/28/2015 8:59:00 AM

Thank u Hannington, that means a lot to me.

Asma Memon

Date: 3/25/2015 4:55:00 PM

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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/28/2015 8:58:00 AM

Thank you.

Louis Spence

Date: 3/25/2015 4:13:00 PM

Thank you Njeri for your kind comment on my youtube video of Red ( Boro Red). Your wee poem above Twitter is fun. And the last line says it all - there is an old Spanish saying - if you cant get what you want, want what you get. Happiness is an inside thing - that is a quote by Mike Tyson, boxer, of all people!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/28/2015 8:57:00 AM

Lol Mike Tyson said that?! Interesting. I really like the Spanish saying. Thank you Louis. Good day.

Asma Memon
Date: 3/25/2015 4:55:00 PM

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