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Twits Wits and Little Fits

Love bluff pink lovely stuff never burns though it melts and when it does flesh like metal smelts fools toys little things of no great value sweet to touch and taste so hallow no finger tips no love on lips when you fly and leave I hope you know and believe that I too go from building like water flow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/13/2011 9:01:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Bias. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2011 6:28:00 PM
BIAS ~ congratulations on your win~ENJOYED YOUR POEM,,have yourself a wonderful Sunday~ ;-) take care,..p.d.
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:48:00 PM
congratulations on your win!!----Lori
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Date: 10/8/2011 10:06:00 PM
ah yes i understand, the flesh is pink, runs rio grande, best emeshed with man, as planned ....
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:24:00 AM
CAn you give me some context, interesting poem, just don't fully understand it, but would like to. Lee
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Date: 10/7/2011 11:02:00 PM
howcome and to what color? just wonderin'~N
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