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Twisted popcorn lace decorates The eastern pale blue sky A canopy of delight hangs Miles and miles up high Upon the eastern horizon An orange sun seeks to climb Across the sun streaks of purple clouds The sun arrives just in time Apricot jam slathered across Dripping stickily on pines Silhouetting an outline there Of oaks and pines combined Thank you, God, for the beautiful Artistic scene on the sky A few moments to watch nature And swallows dart and fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/2/2015 9:30:00 PM
you need to write one on digging taters. I might too. lol
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Date: 6/2/2015 9:29:00 PM
The poem is great here except the last verse seems off on flow. so beautiful Artistic scene painted high...
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Date: 5/30/2015 12:18:00 PM
sara, this is amazing imagery from you. One of your best poems. A fave!
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Date: 5/29/2015 10:10:00 PM
Sara, your words have painted a beautiful picture! Lovely write. Love, Kim
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Date: 5/29/2015 5:51:00 PM
G'day Sara... a nice write about sunrise. Every morning we capture a different scene - thank you - Lindsay
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