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Twist

The bed is just a mattress on the floor, but it has served it’s time well, the scene of many a tryst and tear. She’s sitting there now, on the edge, her shoulders slumped, her body facing me across the room, head turned, looking at the wall to her left. We’re both naked and sweaty; it’s a hot August day. Cities are always hot in August. That’s why Italians vacation in August. But I digress… We started furious, on a dead run, no slow building toward the inevitable joining. In the midst, passion turned to anger, sweat to ice, and the taste in our mouths to iron. What was the twist? An old one: the wrong name whispered. By me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/6/2013 6:34:00 AM
I like the 'taste of iron' -seems to seal the deal. And the title is catchy too.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 3/6/2013 7:47:00 AM
Thanks for the comment. J
Date: 3/5/2013 4:18:00 PM
Ooooooops...great poem.......jack
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Date: 3/5/2013 4:31:00 PM
Thanks, Donna! J
Date: 3/5/2013 12:48:00 PM
You suprised me with this one. At first I thought it was the dance back in the 60's. Very well written. Lucilla
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Date: 3/5/2013 2:41:00 PM
I remember that dance quite well. Thanks for reading it. J
Date: 3/5/2013 11:55:00 AM
Oh Yikes! I really enjoyed this one, Jack...didn't see that coming!!!
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Date: 3/5/2013 12:26:00 PM
I have my sneaky moments. Thanks for reading, Caleb. J

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