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Twirling Girl

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Twirling Girl

swirling, whirling round the room
dress twirling, men swoon

she moves with grace
arms out to brace

her fall
and they all

stare as she goes down
twisted in her gown

she turns red
almost fled

but he was there
only one to care

helps her up
hands cup

her face, pulls her close
touches her nose

they kiss, they dance
he took a chance 

together
forever

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Wrote this while listening to music on youtube, have same username if you want to check me out.