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Twinkle, twinkle, little star, My eyes look up and there you are, A sparkling diamond up so far— Twinkle, twinkle little star. But is this really what I see? Are you truly there for me? Or just a wave of light to be Still beaming through eternity? You may be gone, not really there, Long since expired, white dwarf of air. But still your glow with us you share, At you, in wonderment, we stare. Twinkle, twinkle, little star A sparkling gem of hope you are— That when we pass, our souls up far Will twinkle, twinkle like a star, Like a wave of light to be Still beaming through eternity. April 22, 2015

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Hilo Poet

Date: 2/16/2022 12:40:00 AM

Loving the flow that threads through from the start, Sandra, your use and placement of them were brilliantly induced my friend, my compliments on your winning entry, Aloha~William, Cheers!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2015 8:05:00 PM

Sandra, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/13/2015 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Linda. Nice of you to stop by with your positive comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 6:43:00 PM

Sandra, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/13/2015 12:20:00 PM

Hi Skat, I appreciate your visit and congrats! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2015 3:31:00 PM

dropping by with my congrats Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 12:22:00 PM

LOL not at all:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/13/2015 12:20:00 PM

Jan, thanks again for your continued support. You are a wonder!! Hugs, Sandra

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/9/2015 1:40:00 PM

I really enjoyed this beautiful poem, Sandra. Very nicely written and rhymed. Congrats on a win!

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/11/2015 9:36:00 PM

Hi Kelly, thank you so much for your nice comments. I was pleased to participate in your contest, and I appreciate the nice placement. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra

Genevieve Mika-Stevens

Date: 5/8/2015 9:56:00 AM

Such a charming poem...

Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2015 9:48:00 AM

Sandra, magical and sparkling, it glitters with beauty, 7, best of luck in contest and thanks for visiting my poem, dance into may

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2015 3:45:00 PM

Thanks so much, BW, for your nice comments, support, and best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/23/2015 8:19:00 AM

really beautiful Sandra.. :)!!! wow!! lovely.. :)!..olive eloisa :)!

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2015 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Olive. I appreciate your nice comments! Hugs, Sandra

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/22/2015 5:19:00 PM

Good structure with a natural cadence that welcomes the reader with a smile. Emile.

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2015 3:51:00 PM

Once again, Emile, I am so happy to read your supportive comments. Thank you! Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2015 3:51:00 PM

such a glorious write Sandra - I love your take on the theme - i will post my entry tomorrow - I try to only post one poem a day and hope they get more exposure this way:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2015 3:52:00 PM

Hi Jan, a little late (trying to catch up on comments !), but you know I am always so grateful for your visits and wonderful comments. Thanks again. Hugs, Sandra

Nandita Das

Date: 4/22/2015 12:31:00 PM

Amazingly good. A #7. I enjoyed reading this.

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2015 4:00:00 PM

Hi Nandita, so pleased that you like it. I appreciate your visit. nice comments and support. Hugs, Sandra

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/22/2015 9:54:00 AM

Oh I really like this Sandra and think it will do well in the contest! ~Jan

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2015 4:01:00 PM

Hi Janet, so nice of you to stop by! Thank you for your positive comment and best wishes for the contest. Sandr