Twilight Flare

my twilight love stars above flare both of our hearts true love began more love than sky will span twilight night lives always hearts ablaze share love stays at dawn By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, April 10, 2012 for ** THAN-BAUK A TWILIGHT Contest (Nette Onclaud)

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Carma Sanderson

Date: 5/26/2012 9:06:00 PM

"WOW, lovely written Rhonda Good Luck with your Win. Carma"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2012 6:53:00 AM

well crafted one. Great picture going with it. I know it will do well in the contest!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/11/2012 10:13:00 AM

You have given it a romantic look with this lovely write, jag

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 4/11/2012 9:02:00 AM

Beautiful and nice poem.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2012 7:27:00 AM

love this romantic than bauk, rhonda. many congrats on your wins

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/11/2012 2:16:00 AM

thanks for joining, rhonda.. so nice!.. kindly check rhyme pattern and syl count... i have placed an example on the contest page.. if you need to revise, just edit and update your poem... will do another blog on this later!:) huggs!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/10/2012 9:59:00 PM

Excellent use of the form here Rhonda.Thanks for your inspiring comment at my page.