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Sweet twilight time, end of the day, when sun below horizon sinks with tranquil sky diffused in gray and sapphire-melon colored inks. What peacefulness in your grandeur when doubled in the mirrored lake with ripples that give sparks to your reflection in its gentle wake. Dark tree limbs frame your work of art like loving arms that brace your glow, just like a stage scene set apart, enjoyed before the nighttime show. Sweet twilight time you contrast dawn- she starts the day, you prelude night; within your charm, our thoughts are drawn- reflected in your calm delight. September 21, 2016 ~7th Place~ Premiere Contest: Double Exposure Sponsor: Kai Neumann Judged: 05/25/2020 ~5th Place~ Premiere Contest: Contest No. 236 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 11/11/2016 ~1st Place~ Contest: Twilight Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Judged: 09/24/2016

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Date: 5/25/2020 3:44:00 AM
Hi Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/24/2020 6:35:00 AM
Love the mesmerizing beauty of twilight through your words. This is gorgeous! Congratulations on your win Sandra :)
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Date: 11/13/2016 11:36:00 AM
This is absolutely lovely, Sandra. Congratulations! ...Fran
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2016 6:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Fran! Sandra
Date: 11/12/2016 9:00:00 PM
Your twilight description is lovely! Congrats, Sandra! Xo
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Date: 11/13/2016 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/12/2016 7:39:00 PM
Sandra congratulations on your win in the contest with this lovely write ~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2016 6:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/12/2016 6:59:00 PM
I think I have heard this read by you. A lovely, well written piece. Congratulations on your placement.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2016 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, for your lovely comment and congrats. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/12/2016 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra! I am so proud of you. You have accomplished a lot. I look forward to seeing even more blessings come to you in the future. - Hans
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Hansteven! Sandra
Date: 11/12/2016 4:25:00 AM
Awesome piece!!! Congrats Sandra, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/12/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Teddy. Sandra
Date: 11/11/2016 9:41:00 PM
Lovely- Just Beautiful!!! - Congrats !!!!-
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Date: 11/12/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Rick! Sandra
Date: 9/26/2016 9:29:00 AM
I like that, Sandra: dark tree limbs creating a frame for the stars in the night sky. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 9/25/2016 3:09:00 PM
Many congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:28:00 AM
Sweet Sandra-Loved this one...congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/25/2016 7:56:00 AM
Lovely and exquisite:) congratulations on your top win, Sandra:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 6:29:00 AM
Each line is a poem in its self. Lovely write! Congratulations, Sandra! ...Fran
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Date: 9/25/2016 3:15:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win, Sandra. Agnes
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Date: 9/24/2016 9:51:00 PM
a great poem a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:40:00 PM
Back to say congratulations Mrs Sandra on your first place write. It is a beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/24/2016 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this restful, peaceful poem.
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Date: 9/24/2016 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the first placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2016 5:08:00 PM
Thank you again for a great contest and for wonderful placement, Nayda. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/23/2016 8:23:00 PM
this is so lovely, Sandra And what an interesting image of the sapphire-melon!
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Date: 9/24/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/22/2016 1:59:00 PM
Daniel,is ight your poem leaves a calmness in my soul reading tis poem.
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Date: 9/24/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene. Sandra
Date: 9/22/2016 1:38:00 PM
Beautiful write Sandra...best wishes
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Date: 9/24/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Sandra
Date: 9/22/2016 9:46:00 AM
I'm going to piggyback on Charlie. Your poem leaves such a calm feeling, Mrs Sandra. Simply, lovely!
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Date: 9/22/2016 8:43:00 AM
I'm giving out more sevens today than ever before but no regrets here, this poem is a wonderful touch of nature. In fact I could almost say eight out of seven, if that makes sense to anyone.
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Date: 9/22/2016 7:31:00 AM
Sandra Ma'am this is so exquisite,immaculate meter and rhymes and the meaning is a winner especially the ending. my deepest respect and Gratitude,Ma'am LOVE IS ALL
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