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Twelve Rounds (With) Natethegreat

I challenged you, and you finally took the bait. This was a battle that I had to instigate. But, you only came when I gave you a mandate, So now I will be happy to accommodate. Now Burger King Mandelay is on my hotplate! "YOUR" SELF-MADE throne...I will proceed to desecrate. But, I would love to know what made your head inflate, Because each one of your slams sounded so innate; Not worth the effort that it takes to conjugate. You would be better off trying to slam KUWAIT! I am a master poet. You can not relate. When I started this race, I left you at the gate. The second best slam is what we must nominate, And the other spots are what we must allocate. I apologize for writing rhymes that frustrate. Stop whining! Step up! And try to eliminate! SHUT UP! So that you do not self-incriminate. Males should not be JEALOUS; That is a FEMALE trait! Baby boy...You need to go back and incubate. Climb into the ground, so that you can germinate. Then, much later, I will come back and cultivate. When pest step to the best, I have to fumigate! The day you beat me is the day hell frigerates! Just give the jury a chance to deliberate!

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Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/23/2010 8:36:00 AM

ladies and gentlemen, try not to take this literary jousting too seriously. just two guys sparring with each other. if you would, please go read my poem PLAYING THE DOZENS. then you will understand the perspective that i am coming from. i doing this before i ever heard about either poetrysoup or "slam." carolyn, please do not be offended by anything you read here. it is just a display of rhyme and wit...where the hardest lines make the hardest hits...and where you give as much as you get.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2010 11:06:00 PM

Doc, I enjoyed your poem, but i'm more than sure that you two are having fun. I see no harm whit Daki & Burger King Mandalay/..that was funny. But i am so glad U called him that. I love BURGER KING! Nice rhyme, & flow, and good count.. looks better than your story poems.LOL,what am i talking about. In some of my poems i go on & on & on ,, some of your comments are cool. True if you think about it. But I like Nathan comment, of course why shouldn't I. Maybe U 2 should give it a rest. Later,.p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/22/2010 2:56:00 PM

U guys ready to shake hands yet... or ... keep writing these great slams not called slams any more..??? enjoyed on my wedding day luv..ciao..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/22/2010 2:34:00 PM

Dakarai, Nate, just work it out. I enjoy reading poems written by both of you. But I must take issue with jealousy being a female trait. I have seen some jealous men in my time and they often spend too much time on the "throne." LOL Hope you are both having fun with this. Love, Carolyn

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/22/2010 2:05:00 PM

whatever dude. how about you just give me that lesson that you keep bragging about. i still haven't seen anything impressive from you. step out and step up. happy hunting.

Nate D.

Date: 8/22/2010 1:58:00 PM

still thinking a sheep daki. still thinking i care about a crown and calling me a shepard lolz better to call me a sheep. did i not make myself clear what i was after and you think this weak slam is going to give me scars. you still dont understand the nature of things. still cant see beyond your own limited perception. you are a sheep and think everyone is just like you lolz. now get over it and write me somethign that hurts

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/22/2010 12:55:00 PM

"SOMEBODY" told me about the "rules of twelve" as it relates to slamming (oops! I mean free-versing). Therefore, I will incorporate all the aspects of twelve. Twelve slams. "Twelve syllabols." Multiples of Twelve lines...You get the point.