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Tweaking Spinning faster Forever speed seeking Constantly lost to disaster Master

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/14/2016 11:48:00 AM
Congrats on being featured. love phyl
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Date: 7/29/2008 1:40:00 PM
really liked this one it did flow real well. thank you for reading my poem and for your comments. about your friend paint a picture of Lowell ponds sure, but how? plus i took a lot of pictures down there, and it is really not as beautiful as i write it to be. it is more peaceful than beautiful. but in some ways it may but at any rate, how would we do it?
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