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Turmoil

My heart breaks within me- deep inside I weep- peace is so elusive my mind cannot sleep- is love so unreal, is it out of reach- who will be true to me and their promise keep- if I say a prayer, will faith take a leap- do you have an answer, to life...fathoms' deep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/21/2008 1:41:00 AM
Hi, Congratulations, its a very beautiful poem. regards, rupavardhini
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Date: 9/19/2008 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations Brian, this is so lovely and I love the ending. Very well done. Regards heidie
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Date: 9/19/2008 11:17:00 AM
Dear Brian - Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest. Beautifully written and visually excellent. Peace always, John
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Date: 9/19/2008 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest! Extremely well deserved. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/19/2008 3:40:00 AM
Brian, congrats on this heart-wrenching poem placing in Mark's contest, beautiful, love Kristin
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