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Tulog:Sleep

tulog nahan ka? ~nananaginip... ********************** sleep where are you? ~dreaming... **Sept. 11, 2010 just me tossing ideas in Filipino ...I need to be writing for something else ;)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/21/2011 10:04:00 AM

Love it Nikko, beautiful, Congratulations on your poem win. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2011 9:14:00 PM

Congrats Nikko on a stunning win for this excellent poetry sweetie..luv..

David Williams

Date: 11/19/2011 11:46:00 AM

Nikko congrats on your win, i love this dual language, more please..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:42:00 AM

It's fun seeing this golden oldie, Nikko. Congrats on your win though the placement wasn't as high as I'd have liked to see! Luv, Andrea

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/19/2011 7:17:00 AM

I wish u would do more of these double translations, darling. I love it. It reminds me of dear Gert whom hasn't been around lately. Remember how he'd do a lil Spanish and German...? Anyways,....this is a cute haiku. Congrats...Gwendolen

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2011 12:07:00 AM

NICE NIKKO, Congrats in my contest~SID

De R

Date: 9/21/2011 1:46:00 PM

Were you writing this at 3 AM? This sounds so funny! "sleep where are you? ~dreaming"...:))

Olajide Adelana

Date: 10/11/2010 12:25:00 PM

Lol, I love this. Soupmail

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/10/2010 5:45:00 PM

ahhhh good one!!! Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love just like you!

Kris Walters

Date: 9/13/2010 6:49:00 PM

elusive sleep... beautifully deep! Nicely done Nikko! Hugs, Kris

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2010 12:15:00 AM

soupmail. And a fav for this one too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2010 11:50:00 PM

oh, wow, very short but MOST profound!!! good one, NIkko!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2010 11:50:00 PM

I like what Chris was talking about here too. My haiku contest, when I have it, will include traditional AND modern!

Susan Palli

Date: 9/12/2010 6:54:00 AM

Loved it!!

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/11/2010 3:47:00 PM

This is great, you should do more of it! I have been encouraged to write more poetry in broad Scots... it's definitely fun but I really didn't think it would appeal to many. It seems I was wrong... and after reading this I understand why! Love.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/11/2010 10:11:00 AM

Shame, really hope it has found its way to you.. :) enjoyed your sleepless write..

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 9/11/2010 2:54:00 AM

Haha, a cute idea Nikko, sleep is late for duties because she's off dreaming somewhere. Your haiku style poem made me smile ~ Sharon :)