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Trying To Hold Sand

Isn’t it funny, when you think you’ve finally found what you were looking for Things begin to slip but you try to preserve that perfect picture some more Life starts showing it’s true colour and the perfect picture starts to blur out But You still believe things can go back to normal with no doubt But the more you catch, the more it slips out darkness grows, hope weakens and your life takes a different route The more you hope, the more you drown You are lost, hopeless but you know you can’t look down You lost a part of you and no you can never be the same things went south but there’s no one to blame You must wakeup every morning like nothing’s wrong You have to gear up and try to stay strong whatelse can you do? Things are already wrong, your heart is all blue Whatelse is left to be done? Just Stay strong cause you know you can’t run….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/21/2015 4:45:00 AM
I understand that feeling in your poem, Sakshat... Congrats for having your deep poem featured in the Poetry Soup home page! ;-)
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Date: 11/17/2015 10:09:00 PM
Sakshat,:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/16/2015 9:52:00 AM
A stoic message. There is truth in this though. Acceptance is a sort of blessing. Congrats. daver
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:58:00 AM
Hi Sakshat, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/15/2015 11:45:00 PM
Sakshat, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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