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There is no sweet taste in my mouth, no milk and honey on my lip. Tempered by times inhumanity, the scourge of vinegar's my sip. I am kind, because I bleed for every race, color and creed. I have been crucified by tongues fluidity, yet kindness is not returned to me. Is the any mention of milk and honey ever dripping from the mouth of Jesus? 11/17/16

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Date: 11/20/2016 1:27:00 AM
I like to veracity in your verse Janis! Congratulations on a stellar win! 7 ; )
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/20/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thanks, Connie and also for the rating. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 11/19/2016 4:07:00 AM
Beautiful work, as usual.... Congrats Janis, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/20/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thanks, Teddy.
Date: 11/19/2016 12:02:00 AM
This one is lovely, Janis:) congratulations:)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/20/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks, Jo.
Date: 11/18/2016 11:58:00 AM
wow! made me ponder! very unique thought embedded in your poem dear Janis, congrats on your super win!//love, Anu:)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/18/2016 4:57:00 PM
Thanks, Anu.
Date: 11/18/2016 9:55:00 AM
"I am kind because my heart bleeds for people", lovely line thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/18/2016 4:58:00 PM
Great contest. Thanks for considering my poem. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 11/17/2016 12:54:00 PM
thought-provoking write, janis... you deserve all that is sweet---huggs!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/17/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thanks nette.

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