Trusting

do not be anxious do not fret God is in control He will never leave you alone He is always near though dark days may come trust in Him He is your refuge call on Jesus' name He will save He will light your way 6/19/15 This form is a Lune - a 3 line poem with syllable count of 5/3/5 I was inspired to try this form after seeing a poem written by Dorian Petersen Potter posted here on soup.

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 7/2/2015 9:33:00 AM

Hi, Kim, I liked your Lune poem and you could not have picked a better subject to write about. Praise Him!...I think I'll try and write one myself. You learned this form from another poet, and now you are passing it on to others like me. And I will pass it on to someone else. (Pass it on) and help others learn is a good motto for poets to have. Blessings, ~~~Darlene

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/3/2015 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene! I appreciate your encouragement and enthusiasm. Blessings to you.

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/20/2015 1:50:00 PM

Your faith in God shines brightly throughout your poem. Emile.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/20/2015 8:29:00 PM

Thank you, Emile!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2015 9:03:00 PM

ok, just read this lune of yours. A nice little form for this poem. So great that you got inspired by a fellow Souper.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/20/2015 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2015 9:02:00 PM

Kim, I was finally able to edit that cat poem I posted . If you care to take another look, I think you will understand a lot better now what I was doing!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/19/2015 9:01:00 PM

Kim, this is a well written piece. The message of God being in control speaks loud and clear. Nice form as well. Great job! :) Alexis

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/20/2015 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by!