Trustful

Trustful True reliance Open invitation Confidence poured into vessels Loyal ~*~ For: Catie's "Traditional Cinquain" Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2011 2:37:00 PM

HI, Annalise, I like this thought. the fourth line was a great summary. soupmail.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/17/2011 11:27:00 AM

This is so true Annalise, enjoyed your cinquain tonight.. Had a busy weekend, luckily we are only working 4 days this week, hope your week will be a brilliant one.. Love, Wilma

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/16/2011 8:18:00 AM

That is so true that trust and loyalty go hand in hand. Thank you for your comments. Have a wonderful weekend. Phyl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 5:49:00 AM

Wonderful words to express the truth of the matter ..trust and loyalty go hand in hand Annalise .. good luck in the contest my friend.. and happy weekend too..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 12:36:00 AM

HI, Annalise, lots of good descriptive words for trust and loyalty, my friend!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/14/2011 3:51:00 PM

Your cinquain is awesome, Annalise. Once we lose trust in someone, it is hard to regain it. Loyalty does not seem to be as genuine as it once was. (We learn this the hard way.) Winning wishes for Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/14/2011 12:46:00 PM

Lovely expression on trust, Annalise. But please give once over to the first line "trust", it's single syllable

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/14/2011 12:23:00 PM

ohh anna, one of the virtues or values i so respect.. written so flawlessly from your golden quill! best winning piece, dear one! :) huggs, nette