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Trust In You

At the tender stage of relationships, the hand offered, lips not kissed, the bloom of inner soul tautly wrapped just one more red rose bud to flame open, women who are yearning for affection see the bamboozle offered by the slick as just one more abomination to learn about love. They show their distrust with scorn. They attempt to cast their gaze away but if touched lightly, as if dusted with a light snow, they cease to struggle as if they felt just, too, too cold. They turn up lips, curious to see the taste of someone kind, someone soft. If cherished like every velvet petal of rose, inhaled, enclosed, caressed, enraptured, the relationship is no longer in doubt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/25/2013 11:44:00 PM
Merry Christmas Sheri,, I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA
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Date: 10/10/2013 10:47:00 PM
This is a sweet and loving write. Full of emotion and feeling. A roller coaster of romance and caring. nice job
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:28:00 AM
Beauty of secrets lovely worded. Congrats very lately. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/13/2013 5:16:00 PM
Speaking from the male perspective, I wish more of us would adopt your last three lines. Great writing... Jack
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Date: 12/15/2012 5:07:00 PM
To be trusted and cherished, there will be no room for doubt...love your message in this great write and win! Hugs
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Date: 12/12/2012 10:04:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win my dear friend, Sheri! I enjoyed again reading your great write! Thank you so much and your kind visit and wonderful comments on my latest poem! All the best always! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:20:00 AM
Congrats.. Sheri ...Seren
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Date: 12/10/2012 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Sheri love xx
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Date: 12/10/2012 1:04:00 AM
Beautifully written Sheri! Trust can be hard to come by, but gentlessness of spirit calms the mind. Well done!
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Date: 12/9/2012 1:40:00 PM
sheri... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
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Date: 12/3/2012 2:20:00 PM
A gorgeous write, Sheri. Full of truth and beautifully written!
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Date: 12/2/2012 6:14:00 PM
snow white and rose red the endless facination of live and death. Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:10:00 AM
Your description of an incipient seduction is promising, and is another fine way to depict the subtlety of a kiss.
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