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Dreams Fall Apart

Lies entangled in a web of deceit culminate in anger and self-defeat. Walls you erected to shield you from pain unintentionally block love's refrain. Love requires patience; there is no shortcut, even when doubt leaves a knot in your gut. And fear keeps anxieties well-nourished, devastating dreams where hope once flourished. When egos insist on what cannot be, emotions get imprisoned with no key. Anxieties climb, nerves get tightly wound, and though you search for love, it can't be found. Treating love as an extension of lust, betrayal devastates the bonds of trust. And overwhelmed by tears, dreams fall apart as a torrent of feelings drowns your heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2018 12:17:00 PM
You work the theme of betrayal so well, Emile.
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Date: 1/1/2017 12:08:00 AM
I would call this a poets lament, Its as if the words were mine they are so close to my thoughts! Beautiful write, and I wish you a Happy New Year and hope you doing well!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/1/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I truly appreciate your input my friend, Emile.

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