'trust Again'

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Ps: Not a personal write.

I am sure many can identify with it, whether its male or female

Ruined by your lies Now she will question All those that come after you When will she trust herself again? How will she sift through the truth and lies? How will she differentiate between right and wrong? She has been cut down Her judgment stifled You apologized - Yet she will for months Or maybe even years still wonder Why? Perhaps even blame herself Naïve she was for believing your every word --- But guess what? She is going to try again And with every step Strive and reclaim Her trust and her instinct again ©125329012015

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 12/14/2016 2:45:00 PM

Ooh betrayal . I think we are the pnly animal capable of that terrible breach. I cant trust again.eloquently written

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/9/2015 8:37:00 AM

Dear Wila, Nicely expressed emotions here in this write, love it's clarity of imagery and feeling, great ending to this piece it's well pulled together great finish, nice job, love the streigth you've woven within it, for your person evolution, cheri

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/1/2015 5:04:00 PM

totally relate wilma very beautifully painted deep piece

James Peranteau

Date: 1/31/2015 8:52:00 PM

Wilma, this is so on that you could make souls believe that you yourself have experienced this well known fate in life. Powerful dear poet ! Have a blessed weekend my friend.........much love, james