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Trust is like mirror, Once it is broken, Courage is withdrawn, To look back in it!!! Trust is like precious stone, Hidden in the deep, When someone special comes, It is pulled out as a beam. Trust often fills bliss, Leaving behind smirk, Trying to multiply it, And we are flown with it. Whenever we trust, Have distrust! “Was I right to act?” And we share the lot. We usually think: “Now I am not alone, My heart splits into two. One is with thee.” But, when it is smashed, World is shattered. Ignore the heart beat, Come back please! Trust often breaks, Leaving behind pain, Trying to multiply tears, And we are poured in it. Trust is like disorder, Some come out of its sting. It is also a medicine, Some achieve its destiny. Why does the one betray us? Why do we adore someone? If we need to face the bitterness of separation, then there is no need to trust anyone. Trust my spirit By Shrishty

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Date: 12/19/2010 12:41:00 PM
I couldn't agree more with your message, Shrishty. Analytical, but also moving. Excellent poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:17:00 AM
Very, very true Shrishty. Thanks for the wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:35:00 AM
rakesh!!! my bestie!!!! thank you yaar.... n carol too!!!...its really gud to see..thanks to all the visitors
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:56:00 AM
Awsm work dimpu ..!!! Hv joined this site only to cmmnt on ur poems Well ...Another gr8 mastr piece....!! Really emotional n Heart touching !!! Rock on Well done n keep up d work ...Waiting badly for ur next poem !
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Date: 12/15/2010 5:17:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Shrishty. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/15/2010 5:09:00 AM
hey thanks a lot for ur beautiful comments... it is a gr8 pleasure for me...!!!
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:58:00 PM
very touchy... trust is indeed very important for a relationship, and it's always very hard to find someone worthy of it.... but then it's again necessary to trust someone if you want him/her to trust you... hahaha...paradox!!! anyway, great poetry and remarkable style of writing!
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Date: 12/14/2010 1:53:00 PM
Flowing and emotional thoughts penned on trust with nice images conveying the explicit meanings, Shrishty
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:14:00 AM
the thorns of betrayal can rip trust apart.. a moving, well-scribed piece, shristy! warmest, nette
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